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One Beautiful Sunny day it was finally that time of year,
there i finally get to go to Hawaii. I wanted to Leave as
fast as I can but I forgot to get my tickets so I quickly
got it ,leave my house and went to the airport happy
excited and lonely.
there i finally get to go to Hawaii. I wanted to Leave as
fast as I can but I forgot to get my tickets so I quickly
got it ,leave my house and went to the airport happy
excited and lonely.
It was time to leave the airport and to get on my plane.
“I am tired I am having a little nap” when I wake up we
were they I was so excited I don’t know what to do.
“I am tired I am having a little nap” when I wake up we
were they I was so excited I don’t know what to do.
So I quickly went to my apartments and chucked my
stuff on the bed and yelled “good bye” and off I went
stuff on the bed and yelled “good bye” and off I went
I felt so cold too I chose to go to the spa Who was the
snooze for that they just finished making and it was
called the Hawaii Rock pool say it's like a pool in a rock
just a huge rock with a hole in the middle filled with pool
water was so much fun I could not get out there was a long ladder and I was scared when I first got in there and then when I was hanging out with my friends and who are e I had so much fun and forgot all about that I was scared I did so much fun it got drunk and it was time to go back to my Apartment so I went to my apartment and had a hot warm bath with heaps of bubbles cause I love having baths with bubbles I was so cold I felt like I said I got out with a long drive from home but I managed to get there before midnight and it was a blast The End
snooze for that they just finished making and it was
called the Hawaii Rock pool say it's like a pool in a rock
just a huge rock with a hole in the middle filled with pool
water was so much fun I could not get out there was a long ladder and I was scared when I first got in there and then when I was hanging out with my friends and who are e I had so much fun and forgot all about that I was scared I did so much fun it got drunk and it was time to go back to my Apartment so I went to my apartment and had a hot warm bath with heaps of bubbles cause I love having baths with bubbles I was so cold I felt like I said I got out with a long drive from home but I managed to get there before midnight and it was a blast The End
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Ema I really Like you writing because I like The Words that you Have never used before and I really like your detail. But my Favorite thing When I was Reading it, was When you said you were happy excited and lonely.That was the best part. But Can you fix “I am tired I am having a little nap” Because It Doesn't Really make sense to me.But I really liked your photos that you put in the start they looked magnificent But The Writing Was superb and outstanding But Keep up the Amazing work Ema!
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